Coming of age we all grow up and we get older what also get bigger is the responsibility we have and obtain. Now that we are older we have to do things on our own and we don't have as many chances and easy passes on things. Now this is the time things become more difficult and thins the start of a long journy ahead of us with many trails in our path and we need to be responsibility no matter how hard it is or how hard it going to become. This is our chance to practice and learn how to do things right and not to slack off and show we are to be adults.
When I think of coming of age and responsibility I think of hard working young adults getting ready for the future.Evenn though im not responsible as other people I think im getting to the point where im like completed getting ready for the future even though im not comletey therre yet.
Kids and even some adults don't think them doing there responsibility is worth it because its hard but for the people who do there's even if its hard is the people who should be the role model because they can learn alot from the responsible people and even fallow there ways and make there life much better. I use this topic for my coming ofvage project because.its something we all have to go through and we need to do even adults.
Thursday, June 16, 2011
diary entry
Dear diary
I have to act like im sleeping before mom comes home if she finds out I lost my gold chain im going to be in trouble I was begging her to trust me to wear it and take care of it because it was my grandmother and she did give it to me when she past away. She told me to be careful but I wasn't she going to be disappointed. She trusted me because she thought I was responsible enough but I failed.I just wanted to show her im a big boy and I can have responsibility like her and daddy. Its hard to be responaible im just going to have to tell mommy the truth.
Dear diary remember yesterday well I told mommy the truth and guess what she told me it was responsible for telling her the truth and not lieing to her now im like the big kids now.
I have to act like im sleeping before mom comes home if she finds out I lost my gold chain im going to be in trouble I was begging her to trust me to wear it and take care of it because it was my grandmother and she did give it to me when she past away. She told me to be careful but I wasn't she going to be disappointed. She trusted me because she thought I was responsible enough but I failed.I just wanted to show her im a big boy and I can have responsibility like her and daddy. Its hard to be responaible im just going to have to tell mommy the truth.
Dear diary remember yesterday well I told mommy the truth and guess what she told me it was responsible for telling her the truth and not lieing to her now im like the big kids now.
Tuesday, April 26, 2011
Be more chill final
Be more chill by Ned is about a kid name Jeremy and how he went from one of the biggest losers in school to one of the coolest.I want to focus on how the squip a pill that acts like a computer in his head that tells him or helps make decision.That's what made Jeremy cool how he changed so much from before he had the squip to afterwards.I also want to focus on Jeremy relationship with girls from no one wants to talk to him to getting girls phone numbers with out trying.Lastly how his attitude changed so much and his appearance changed.
In the beginning Jeremy Heere had something he called the "humiliation" sheet which had all the negative things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return then one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael.He is just like Jeremy not popular at all.Once Jeremy took the squip he changed a lot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When Jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasn't helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice Jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got Chloe's number.He was closes to sex then he ever was in till her boyfriend Brock interrupted the little get together.
Jeremy was a scrawny loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started making Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. episode and commercial which buffed him up a little.And when he was talking to someone he was always smooth never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.The squip have Jeremy what he thought he wanted and couldn't give him what he really truly wanted was Christine.
Be more chill is great for a teenager in high school who doesn't fit in.He took something called a squip and now he is way cooler than he ever was before he was just a loser.His relationship changed with girls a lot because of the squip.The squip also helped his attitude and appearance changed with the squips help.This is a great book for kids who is different than everyone els so they can relate to this book.
In the beginning Jeremy Heere had something he called the "humiliation" sheet which had all the negative things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return then one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael.He is just like Jeremy not popular at all.Once Jeremy took the squip he changed a lot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When Jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasn't helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice Jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got Chloe's number.He was closes to sex then he ever was in till her boyfriend Brock interrupted the little get together.
Jeremy was a scrawny loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started making Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. episode and commercial which buffed him up a little.And when he was talking to someone he was always smooth never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.The squip have Jeremy what he thought he wanted and couldn't give him what he really truly wanted was Christine.
Be more chill is great for a teenager in high school who doesn't fit in.He took something called a squip and now he is way cooler than he ever was before he was just a loser.His relationship changed with girls a lot because of the squip.The squip also helped his attitude and appearance changed with the squips help.This is a great book for kids who is different than everyone els so they can relate to this book.
Thursday, March 31, 2011
Be more chill Draft
Be more chill by Ned is about a kid name Jeremy and how he went from one of the biggest losers in school to one of the coolest.I want to focus on how the squip thats what made Jeremy cool how he changed so much from before he had the squip to afterwards.I also want to focus on Jeremy relationship with girls from no one wants to talk to him to getting girls phone numbers with out trying.Lastly how his attitude changed so much and his appearance changed.
In the beginning Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negative things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return then one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael.He is just like Jeremy no friends nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once Jeremy took the squip he changed a lot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When Jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasn't helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice Jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got Chloe's number.He was closes to sex then he ever was in till her boyfriend Brock interrupted the little get together.
Jeremy was a scrawny loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started making Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. episode and commercial which buffed him up a little.And when he was talking to someone he was always smooth never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
Be more chill is great for a teenager in high school who doesn't fit in.He took something called a squip and now he is way cooler than he ever was before he was just a loser.His relationship changed with girls a lot because of the squip.The squip also helped his attitude and appearance changed with the squips help.This is a great book for kids who is different than everyone els so they can relate to this book.
In the beginning Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negative things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return then one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael.He is just like Jeremy no friends nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once Jeremy took the squip he changed a lot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When Jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasn't helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice Jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got Chloe's number.He was closes to sex then he ever was in till her boyfriend Brock interrupted the little get together.
Jeremy was a scrawny loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started making Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. episode and commercial which buffed him up a little.And when he was talking to someone he was always smooth never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
Be more chill is great for a teenager in high school who doesn't fit in.He took something called a squip and now he is way cooler than he ever was before he was just a loser.His relationship changed with girls a lot because of the squip.The squip also helped his attitude and appearance changed with the squips help.This is a great book for kids who is different than everyone els so they can relate to this book.
Wednesday, March 23, 2011
Reading response
My response is on the great book be ore chill by Ned Vizzini.I want to focus on how the squip changed all around.Like how his rep changed from before to after.Also how his life changed with girls like relationship like and his sex life.Another i want to focus on is how the squip changed his apperence and his attitude.
In the begining Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negitve things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael he is just like Jeremy has no friends nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once jeremy took the squip he changed alot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasnt helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got chloes number.He was closes to sex then he ever was intill her boyfriend Brock interupted the little get togeather.
Jeremy was a scrany loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started makin Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. epidsode and comercial which buffed him up alittle.And when he was talking to someone he was always smoothed never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
Be more chill is a great book written by Ned Vizzini.The big focus is how Jeremy the main character changed from the nonsquip using loser to the big popularity squip using smooth guy.With the squip his rep changed big.It also his relationship with girls.And his apperence and attitude changed alot
In the begining Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negitve things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael he is just like Jeremy has no friends nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once jeremy took the squip he changed alot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
When jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasnt helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got chloes number.He was closes to sex then he ever was intill her boyfriend Brock interupted the little get togeather.
Jeremy was a scrany loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started makin Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. epidsode and comercial which buffed him up alittle.And when he was talking to someone he was always smoothed never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
Be more chill is a great book written by Ned Vizzini.The big focus is how Jeremy the main character changed from the nonsquip using loser to the big popularity squip using smooth guy.With the squip his rep changed big.It also his relationship with girls.And his apperence and attitude changed alot
Wednesday, February 16, 2011
ZayZeeblogger, Not Afraid, Bloggers Unit
Isaiahs blog is very nice. You can tell he put alot of effort into his homework and blog post. He elaborated and took time into what he said he picked his words wisely and made it very intresting. I like that he also took time to decorate his blog page which also makes it iteresting. If i'm correct all of his work is on time and thats good to. I really think he did really good on responses to poems and to the picture made by van gogh.
Nurshat's blog has alot of meaningful deep response on her blog. I'm not sure if they're personal or not but she knows what she talking about. Its clear that she has alot to say and she does it with clear understanding. Ithink Nurshat is doing very well with her blog she should try to get to the next level and she where it takes her.
Hanna's blog is very good to i thought Nurshat wrote and expanded her writing but she does have alot to say in her blog. She made alittle post that said does anyone read my blog and even if nobody does she should be happy that she can say so much on each one of her post. She also had some very educational words and sentences.Hanna has a good blod with alot of effort.
Nurshat's blog has alot of meaningful deep response on her blog. I'm not sure if they're personal or not but she knows what she talking about. Its clear that she has alot to say and she does it with clear understanding. Ithink Nurshat is doing very well with her blog she should try to get to the next level and she where it takes her.
Hanna's blog is very good to i thought Nurshat wrote and expanded her writing but she does have alot to say in her blog. She made alittle post that said does anyone read my blog and even if nobody does she should be happy that she can say so much on each one of her post. She also had some very educational words and sentences.Hanna has a good blod with alot of effort.
Sunday, January 23, 2011
the landscape of the fall of Icarus response
the landscape of the fall of Icarus by William Carlos Williams
Observation: This is a poem about how a man with wax wings fly up to the sun but falls when the wax melts and he falls to earth and lands in water and drowns which is told by another persons point of view on something that wasn't noticed but is known.
Inference: Its a poem that's say such a amazing legend of a man flying with wings made of wax destroyed by the wings weakness of the suns mighty heat that killed the man who made him a legend which was made unkown because of it to everyone but Brueghel.
Interpretation: When i read this poem what always comes to mind is the only weakness in the world to his wax wings killed him from him being mighty and flying all the way to the sun on a nice spring day
Observation: This is a poem about how a man with wax wings fly up to the sun but falls when the wax melts and he falls to earth and lands in water and drowns which is told by another persons point of view on something that wasn't noticed but is known.
Inference: Its a poem that's say such a amazing legend of a man flying with wings made of wax destroyed by the wings weakness of the suns mighty heat that killed the man who made him a legend which was made unkown because of it to everyone but Brueghel.
Interpretation: When i read this poem what always comes to mind is the only weakness in the world to his wax wings killed him from him being mighty and flying all the way to the sun on a nice spring day
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