Thursday, March 31, 2011

Be more chill Draft

   Be more chill by Ned is about a kid name Jeremy and how he went from one of the biggest losers in school to one of the coolest.I want to focus on how the squip thats what made Jeremy cool how he changed so much from before he had the squip to afterwards.I also want to focus on Jeremy relationship with girls from no one wants to talk to him to getting girls phone numbers with out trying.Lastly how his attitude changed so much and his appearance changed.
   In the beginning Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negative things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return then one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael.He is just like Jeremy no friends  nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once Jeremy took the squip he changed a lot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
  When Jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasn't helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice Jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got Chloe's number.He was closes to sex then he ever was in till her boyfriend Brock interrupted the little get together.
    Jeremy was a scrawny loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started making Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. episode and commercial which buffed him up a little.And when he was talking to someone he was always smooth never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated  the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
   Be more chill is great for a teenager in high school who doesn't fit in.He took something called a squip and now he is way cooler than he ever was before he was just a loser.His relationship changed with girls a lot because of the squip.The squip also  helped his attitude and appearance changed with the squips help.This is a great book for kids who is different than everyone els so they can relate to this book.

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Reading response

  My response is on the great book be ore chill by Ned Vizzini.I want to focus on how the squip changed all around.Like how his rep changed from before to after.Also how his life changed with girls like relationship like and his sex life.Another i want to focus on is how the squip changed his apperence and his attitude.
  In the begining Jeremy Heere which is the main character had something he called the humiliation sheet which had all the negitve things done to him.He would do a head nod but they refuse to return one he would add that to his humiliation sheet.Jeremy only had one friend and was his best friend named Michael he is just like Jeremy has no friends nobody likes him either and not popular at all.Once jeremy took the squip he changed alot.He is now friends with a kid name Rich and is very high in the popularity status.And is getting girl friends and getting closer to his main target Christine.
  When jeremy had his own mind and the squip wasnt helping him he was a total loser no girl like him and also talked to him.When they notice jeremy has a crush on Christine the started telling her that she has a new stalker on her hands.When the squip came into the picture he got chloes number.He was closes to sex then he ever was intill her boyfriend Brock interupted the little get togeather.
    Jeremy was a scrany loser who no one liked.He was that nerdy weird kid that no one wanted to be friends with.The squip changed all that.The squip started makin Jeremy do 10 push-ups at every t.v. epidsode and comercial which buffed him up alittle.And when he was talking to someone he was always smoothed never weird or making mistakes unless talking to Christine because the squip miscalculated  the reaction of her with the timing and made him from top of the popularity rank to the biggest loser rank....again.
  Be more chill is a great book written by Ned Vizzini.The big focus is how Jeremy the main character changed from the nonsquip using loser to the big popularity squip using smooth guy.With the squip his rep changed big.It also his relationship with girls.And his apperence and attitude changed alot